Writing in English is like Scuba diving in the sea. First, you must attend theoretical training about the scuba equipment and body behavior into different atmospheres of pressing. Next day you make some practices in a child pool and after you are ready start the experience in the sea. You are never alone, the trainer is always close to you, supporting and checking your air tank. Air is crucial to stay into the ocean.
The first diving is just 10 meters, for 30 minutes more or less. After that, on the surface you must have the registration about your scuba on your own binnacle you always have to write about the place, time spending and deep.
You have to go gradually to the deep and come back slower; resting each 10 meters due to your body needs time to eliminate the Nitrogen accumulated. You have to wait the correct time for the next diving. More deep means more time to rest and more slowly for to do it.
Writing in your binnacle, let you know your advances and next step for to do. Each scuba diving is marvelous and great chance to see the majestic coral reefs, multicolor fishes and if you are lucky one shark. Do not be afraid, you are saved keeping positive aptitude and feeling comfortable with yourself.
I like metaphor, but I think you should make a little bit longer the introduction.
ReplyDeleteinstead of say first, i think is better in first place.
i don't understand "body behavior", i think is better body language.