I have still in my mind my first contact with writing, I was about 5 o 6 years old, my mom just took me out of primary, because my teacher used to hit me, so I stayed at home, at first I thought "well I'm so lucky" but then my nightmare started. I lived with my mom, brother (who is younger than me) and my aunt with her husband and daughter. The problem began when my mom started to work so she left me with my aunt, who took care of me, well that was the idea.
Days were gone until one day my aunt decided to teach me at home. But that was a terrible idea. she used to be an angry woman, she worse than my ex-teacher, she yelled at me, hit me and punished me just because I did not understand something or if I did it wrong. With tears I learnt to read and write. Mi first pieces of writing were those that I put into my mom's purse. in which I asked her to come back early.
OMG! that's really sad u almost made me cry, :(... Taking out feelings the exercise was intended to write the experience as a writer in your whole life, so it's missing some info. here u just talk abt ur childhood. *Review possessives in your text.
ReplyDelete*5 or 6 years...
*my mom started to work, so she...
*care of me. Well, that was the idea.
*Second paragraph, second line - capital letter.
* She was worse than...
* I hadn't understood something... or I hadn't it wrong (wrongly" not sure.
*My mom's purse, in which...
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